Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğrudan ama dilbilgisi ve anlam netliği zayıf. Daha doğal ve doğru cümleler kurmalı, zaman ifadesini ve sahiplik ifadelerini düzeltmelisiniz. Ayrıca gereksiz kelime veya yanlış kelime kullanımından kaçının (ör. “borrowed for me in my purse day” belirsiz ve yanlış). Cümlenizi bir konu cümlesi ile başlatın, ardından kısa bir açıklama veya detay ekleyin. Önerilen hedef: 2-3 cümle, net zaman belirterek ve doğru fiil kullanımına dikkat ederek. Örnek odak noktaları: doğru geçmiş zaman, sahiplik ‘my mum bought/borrowed me a bike’ yerine ‘my mum bought me a bike’ veya ‘my mum lent me a bike’.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mum bought it for me on my birthday when I was eleven, and I rode it every day to practice and visit friends.

제안: Cevap fikir belirtiyor ama çelişkili ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Önce net bir görüş (evet/hayır veya kısmen) verin, sonra bu görüşü destekleyen spesifik örnekler kullanın. Zaman uyumuna dikkat edin (ör. “had a bike” yerine “have bikes”), bağlantı sözcükleriyle akışı düzeltin (e.g. “however”, “for example”). Mümkünse yer ve demografik örnekler verin. Hedef: 2-3 cümle, tutarlı görüş + kısa neden/örnek.

예시: I think bikes are moderately popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips in cities, especially students and delivery workers, although cars remain more common for longer journeys.

× My mum borrowed for me in my purse day when I was eleven years old.

✓ My mum bought one for me on my birthday when I was eleven years old.

The original sentence uses incorrect verbs and prepositions: 'borrowed for me' is not appropriate because borrowing is taking something temporarily; the intended meaning is likely that the mother obtained the bike as a gift. Also 'in my purse day' is ungrammatical; the correct phrase is 'on my birthday'. Suggestion: use 'bought one for me' or 'gave me one' and the preposition 'on' with 'birthday'.

× It's not that popular, but in my country when I go outside I see a lot of people had a bike and they play with it.

✓ It's not that popular, but in my country when I go outside I see a lot of people have bikes and they ride them.

The clause 'I see a lot of people had a bike' mixes past tense 'had' with present context introduced by 'when I go outside I see'. Use present simple 'have' for habitual or general truths. Also 'play with it' is unnatural for bicycles; use 'ride them'. Use plural 'bikes' and pronoun 'them' to match plural. Suggestion: keep consistent present tense and use appropriate verbs ('have', 'ride').