Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ слишком короткий и не по существу. Необходимо давать прямой ответ и развивать его конкретными деталями: когда у вас был велосипед, кто вам его подарил, как часто вы катались, какие воспоминания связаны с этим. Используйте связки для плавного перехода между идеями (for example, when, because, so). Ограничьте ответ 2–4 предложениями, чтобы он был естественным и эффективным.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was about eight. My parents bought it for me for my birthday, and I rode it almost every day around the neighborhood. Because of that, I learned to be independent and made many happy memories with my friends.

제안: Ответ неинформативный и не соответствует требованиям. Нужно дать явное мнение и поддержать его конкретными причинами или примерами: насколько распространены велосипеды, кто ими пользуется, в каких ситуациях, есть ли инфраструктура. Используйте связки (for instance, moreover, because) и держите ответ в пределах 2–4 предложений.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities and among students. For instance, many people use them for short commutes because traffic is heavy and parking is expensive. Moreover, local councils have been improving bike lanes, which encourages more people to cycle.

× 'Compromise.'

✓ 'Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.'

'The student response "Compromise." is not a grammatically correct sentence and does not answer the examiner's question. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The examiner asked a past simple question "Did you have a bike when you were a child?" so the reply should use the past tense. A correct brief response is "Yes, I did." or a full sentence "I had a bike when I was a child." Suggestion: answer using past simple and include a subject and verb to form a complete sentence.'

× 'Blah blah blah blah blah.'

✓ 'Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for commuting and exercise.'

'The response "Blah blah blah blah blah." is not a real sentence and fails to answer the question, which is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The examiner asked about the current popularity of bikes, so the present simple tense is appropriate ("are" and "use"). Provide a clear statement and brief supporting details. Suggestion: use present simple for general facts and include a subject and verb to make a complete, relevant answer.'