Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly explain with a specific detail and a linking word. Avoid awkward phrasing like “since I was losing” and use correct tense and quantifiers.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was young, but I lost it about five or six times, so my mother eventually stopped buying me new ones.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., plural/singular agreement) and avoid repeating phrases. Mention one or two concrete examples or comparisons to strengthen your answer.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. However, there aren’t enough dedicated bike lanes, so cyclists often have to share busy roads with cars, which can be unsafe.

× Yes, but since I was losing my bike for five to six times, my mom stopped buying me bikes.

✓ Yes, but because I lost my bike five or six times, my mom stopped buying me bikes.

The original uses 'since I was losing' which incorrectly applies progressive past and 'since' implying a time period; the simple past 'lost' correctly states completed events. Also 'for five to six times' is unnatural; use 'five or six times'. Suggestion: use simple past for completed actions and 'five or six times' to indicate frequency.

× Yes, but since I was losing my bike for five to six times, my mom stopped buying me bikes.

✓ Yes, but because I lost my bike five or six times, my mom stopped buying me bikes.

The phrase 'for five to six times' is ungrammatical; when counting occurrences use 'five or six times'. The rest of sentence keeps 'bike' singular when referring to a single item lost multiple times; 'bikes' is correct when referring to multiple purchases. Suggestion: say 'I lost my bike five or six times'.

× I would say yes, the bikes are popular in my country but there are not enough road for bikes in my country.

✓ I would say yes, bikes are popular in my country, but there are not enough roads for bikes here.

The phrase 'there are not enough road' mixes plural meaning with singular noun; use plural 'roads'. Also avoid repeating 'in my country' twice; 'here' is natural. Maintain present tense 'are' for general facts. Suggestion: use plural nouns for countable items and avoid redundancy.

× I would say yes, the bikes are popular in my country but there are not enough road for bikes in my country.

✓ I would say yes, bikes are popular in my country, but there are not enough roads for bikes here.

The original repeats 'in my country' and uses awkward word order. Use 'roads for bikes' or 'bike lanes' with correct preposition and noun order. Also omit unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'bikes' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use 'roads for bikes' or 'bike lanes' and avoid repeating location phrases.

× I would say yes, the bikes are popular in my country but there are not enough road for bikes in my country.

✓ I would say yes, bikes are popular in my country, but there are not enough roads for bikes here.

Using 'the bikes' implies specific bikes; when speaking generally, omit 'the'. Also 'not enough road' lacks article agreement and number; use 'roads'. Suggestion: drop 'the' when generalizing and use plural nouns for countable items.