Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えは簡潔で分かりやすいですが、内容がやや混在しており、過去の状況と現在の状況を分けて述べるとより明瞭になります。また、理由や短い詳細（どんな自転車だったか、どれくらい乗ったか）を1〜2文で付け加えると評価が上がります。文のつなぎには簡単な接続詞（for example, so, and）を使ってください。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child I had a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it almost every day around my neighbourhood. Now I still own a bicycle that I use sometimes for short trips to the store.

제안: 回答は意見を述べて理由も示しており良いです。ただし一文が少し長めで語彙や具体例を加えるとさらに良くなります。例えば割合や場所（都市部か地方か）、政策やインフラ（自転車道の有無）について短く触れると説得力が増します。接続詞（however, because, therefore）を活用して論理を明確にしてください。

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in big cities, because I rarely see people cycling. Instead, many people prefer electric scooters or cars, and there are few dedicated bike lanes, which makes cycling less convenient.

× Yes I did. Currently I do have a bicycle that I can use.

✓ Yes, I did. Currently I have a bicycle that I can use.

The student used 'do have' for emphasis but in this neutral statement 'have' is sufficient. Using 'do' with simple present is for emphasis or contrast; here it's unnecessary and sounds awkward. Also insert a comma after 'Yes'. Suggestion: use simple present 'I have' for present possession unless you want to emphasize contrast (e.g., 'I do have').

× I don't think bikes are popular in my country compared to other European countries because I barely see anyone riding a bicycle.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country compared to other European countries because I rarely see anyone riding a bicycle.

'Barely' suggests almost not at all and collocates with quantities; 'rarely' is more natural when describing frequency of seeing people. Use simple present 'see' is correct for habitual observation. Suggestion: replace 'barely' with 'rarely' to sound natural.

× There are much more people who are on an electronic scooter or driving a car.

✓ There are many more people who use electronic scooters or drive cars.

'Much more people' is ungrammatical: 'people' is countable, so use 'many more people'. Also 'who are on an electronic scooter' is awkward; use 'who use electronic scooters'. Parallel structure: 'use ... or drive ...' keeps verbs consistent. Suggestion: use 'many more' with countable nouns and maintain parallel verb forms.