Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb tenses, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, “because” or “so”), and give one specific detail such as the type of bike or a brief memory to enrich the answer. Keep it to no more than four sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had two or three bicycles when I was a child, and I rode one to school every day. Because my school was quite far, the journey usually took about an hour. I especially remember riding an old red bike with a basket that I loved.

제안: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary, and use clearer linking phrases (e.g., “on the other hand,” “however,” “because of”). Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement and articles) and avoid vague phrases like “I think it's depend.” Add one specific example or statistic to support your opinion.

예시: It depends on where you live. In rural areas, bicycles and motorcycles are very popular because public transport is limited. However, in city centers they are less common due to heavy traffic and safety concerns, so many people prefer buses or cars.

× Yes I did. I remembered I have two, two or three bikes when I was younger and I did actually circle to school every day.

✓ Yes, I did. I remembered I had two, maybe two or three, bikes when I was younger, and I actually rode my bike to school every day.

The student mixes past and present tense. 'Remembered' requires past reference 'had' for possession in the past (past tense issue). Also 'circle to school' is incorrect verb choice; use 'rode my bike to school' to indicate past habitual action. Suggestions: keep verbs consistent in past tense for past events (remembered -> had; ride in past -> rode). Use commas for clarity.

× It took around one hour from my place to school.

✓ It took around one hour to get from my home to school.

The original uses awkward prepositional phrasing and 'place' is vague. Maintain past tense 'took' but use natural expressions: 'to get from my home to school' or 'for me to get from home to school'. Suggestion: use 'home' instead of 'place' and 'to get from...to...'.

× I think it's depend, if suppose one live in rural area, yes it's very popular to use a bike or motorcycle.

✓ I think it depends: if someone lives in a rural area, then yes, it is very common to use a bike or a motorcycle.

'It's depend' is incorrect: use the third-person singular present 'it depends' (modal/verb form). 'One live' needs third-person singular 'one lives' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'suppose' is unnecessary; use 'if' or 'if someone'. Use 'common' rather than 'popular to use' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct present-tense form for general statements.

× But if you live in city center I don't think it's very popular because it's dangerous to.

✓ But if you live in the city center, I don't think it's very common because it is dangerous to do so.

Missing article before 'city center'—should be 'the city center' (article error/ preposition context). The phrase 'dangerous to' is incomplete; add 'do so' or 'ride there' to complete the idea. Suggestion: include the definite article and finish the clause after 'dangerous'. Also 'popular' is less natural than 'common' here.