Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Good direct response and clear supporting detail. To improve further, make the answer slightly more concise (max 4–5 sentences), add a linking phrase to connect ideas, and include one specific detail (e.g., how long it took or where you rode) to enrich the content.

예시: Yes, I had a bike from about age seven. At first I wasn’t confident, but after practicing in my driveway with my father for a few weeks, I learned to ride without training wheels. As a result, I felt very proud and started riding to the nearby park every weekend.

제안: The answer addresses the question but has several language errors and some unclear words. To improve: correct vocabulary mistakes (bike, riders, commuters, students), use linking words (for example, moreover), and provide one specific example or statistic to support your claim. Keep the response concise and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. They are convenient and economical for short commutes; for example, many office workers and students cycle to work or university to avoid traffic. Moreover, bikes are cheap to buy and easy to park, which makes them a common choice in cities.

× I wasn't confident at first, but after practicing in my driveway with my father, I gradually learned to ride without training wheels and felt very proud of myself.

✓ I wasn't confident at first, but after practicing in my driveway with my father, I gradually learned to ride without training wheels and felt very proud of myself.

No grammatical error requiring correction under the provided list; sentence correctly uses past tense consistently and is appropriate for the question about childhood. Keep as is.

× Yes, bites are very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

Spelling error: 'bites' is a wrong word form and makes the subject meaningless. This falls under singular/plural/word choice issues in context. Correcting to 'bikes' fixes the noun to the intended plural. Suggestion: proofread for typos that change words.

× They are very convenient and economical way to get around, especially for short commutes and renders.

✓ They are a very convenient and economical way to get around, especially for short commutes and errands.

Two issues: missing article before 'very convenient...' and wrong word 'renders'. The noun phrase needs an article 'a' because 'way' is singular (article error/type 22 but treated as adjective/article combination). 'Renders' is a misspelling for 'errands'. Use 'a very convenient and economical way' and 'errands' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: check noun count and word choice, and use a/an when a singular countable noun follows modifiers.

× Many people choose bikes because they are cheap to buy and easy to park, so they are used in everyday life by student or workers alike.

✓ Many people choose bikes because they are cheap to buy and easy to park, so they are used in everyday life by students and workers alike.

The phrase 'student or workers' mixes singular and plural and uses 'or' incorrectly. Both nouns should be plural and joined by 'and' to indicate both groups. This is a singular/plural agreement issue. Suggestion: ensure parallel number and use 'and' when referring to multiple groups collectively.