Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question with a topic sentence and supporting detail (routine). To improve, make the language more natural and concise, correct minor grammar (use articles and verbs), and vary vocabulary slightly. Keep responses within 2–4 sentences and use a linking word if adding detail.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it every evening as part of my routine, usually for about half an hour, which helped me relax after school.

제안: Your answer attempts to answer the question but is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. To improve, remove fillers (uh, umm), state your main idea clearly, give a specific reason or example, and use correct grammar (plural forms, articles). Use one linking word to connect your reason.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children aged 6 to 14, because they are inexpensive and easy to use for short trips. For example, many kids ride bicycles to school or to play with friends after class.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. Back then I loved to ride it every evening and that was the kind of my routine, to ride bike for at least half an hour.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. Back then I loved riding it every evening, and that was my routine: riding the bike for at least half an hour.

The original sentence mixed infinitive form and awkward phrasing. Use the gerund 'riding' after 'loved' (verb + -ing form) and after 'routine' to express habitual action in the past. Also include the definite article 'the' before 'bike' and restructure with a colon or comma for clarity. Suggestion: use 'loved riding' and 'my routine: riding the bike...' to be grammatically correct and natural. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Yes, uh, in my country bikes are quite popular among the children of age group, umm, 6 to 14.

✓ Yes, in my country, bikes are quite popular among children aged 6 to 14.

The phrase 'the children of age group' is incorrect. Use 'children aged 6 to 14' to indicate an age range. Also remove filler words and add commas for clarity. This fixes article/phrase misuse and improves natural expression. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× I'll say uh, because we uh, child as a child everyone have craze to write their own.

✓ I'd say that as children, everyone has a craze for riding their own bike.

The original has multiple issues: 'everyone have' is incorrect—use 'everyone has' (subject-verb agreement). The phrase 'craze to write their own' seems intended to mean 'craze for riding their own bike'. Correct the verb phrase and noun. Use 'I'd say that' for a polite opinion. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement ('everyone has') and use the correct preposition 'craze for' plus the correct noun phrase 'riding their own bike'. Grammar problem type ID: 27