Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변은 전반적으로 자연스럽고 내용이 구체적입니다. 다만 'practising on the past park path' 같은 표현은 어색하며, 문장 연결을 조금 더 명확하게 해 주세요. 또한 불필요한 반복을 피하고(예: 'I had a bike when I was seven'과 'My parents gave me a birthday present'는 연결해서 간결히 표현 가능), 어휘를 다양하게 사용하면 더 좋습니다. 예를 들어 연습 기간, 어려움, 감정 등을 한두 문장으로 덧붙여 내용을 풍부하게 만드세요.

예시: Yes, I got my first bike as a birthday present when I was seven, and I rode it every day around the neighbourhood. At first I practised on the park path until I gained enough confidence, and after a few weeks I was comfortable cycling on busier streets.

제안: 답변이 매우 불명확하고 문법적으로도 어긋납니다. 질문에 직접 답하는 주제 문장을 먼저 말한 뒤, 이유와 구체적인 예시를 한두 문장으로 연결하세요. 연결어(for example, because, therefore 등)를 사용해 논리적으로 전개하고, 단어 선택을 정확히 하세요(예: 'we have many bicycles' 또는 'bicycles are common' 등).

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and practical for short trips. For example, many people cycle to work or school in smaller cities, and there are also public bike-sharing schemes in major urban areas.

× Yes, we had a bicycle or of them I also I had a bunch

✓ Yes, many people in my country have bicycles, and I also had one.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing in structure: fragments are run together and word order is wrong. This falls under sentence structure errors (ID 26). The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning: use a clear subject ('many people in my country'), correct verb tense for general statement ('have' for present), and a coordinated clause for personal experience ('and I also had one'). Suggestions: separate ideas into complete clauses, choose the correct tense for general facts (present simple), and use appropriate noun phrases ('many people', 'bicycles') and pronouns ('one') to avoid repetition.