Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct topic sentence in past tense, add one or two specific supporting details, and avoid short, incomplete answers. Use linking words if you add details. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle with a basket that my parents bought for me when I was seven. I used it every day to ride to my friend's house and to the park, which helped me become more independent.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, plural forms). Be specific about who uses bikes and give one or two concrete examples or reasons, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid unclear words (e.g., 'eagle').

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. They are used by teenagers and young adults for commuting, and many delivery workers use motorbikes or bicycles to make fast deliveries in cities, especially during rush hour.

× Yeah, I have a bike.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using present tense 'have' conflicts with the time frame. Replace 'have' with past simple 'had' to match the past context. Suggestion: Use time markers to choose tense correctly, e.g., 'When I was a child, I had a bike.'

× Yeah, it's popular, from teenagers to youngsters to eagle, and everyone have it for their deliveries.

✓ Yeah, they're popular: teenagers, young adults and even delivery workers all have them for their deliveries.

Multiple problems: pronoun 'it' should agree with plural noun 'bikes' ('they' or 'them'), and 'everyone have' is incorrect because 'everyone' requires singular verb 'has'. Also the word 'eagle' is incorrect in this context; likely intended 'elder' or 'adults' or 'delivery riders'. The correction uses plural agreement ('they're' for 'they are') and changes 'everyone have' to 'all have' to avoid the singular verb with 'everyone'. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns match number of nouns and choose appropriate nouns; use 'everyone has' if keeping 'everyone' (e.g., '...and everyone has one for deliveries.').