Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear, ungrammatical and too short. Give a direct past-tense topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct verb tense (past) and specific descriptions (type, color, who gave it, how you used it). Avoid filler words like “uh.”

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it around the park every weekend. Because it had training wheels at first, I felt safe while learning, and by the time I was nine I could ride confidently without them.

제안: Your answer is too short and lacks explanation. Start with a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, however, although). Mention contexts where bikes are or are not common (cities, rural areas) and provide a brief comparison or consequence.

예시: Not really; bicycles are not very popular in my country because many people prefer cars for long distances and public transport is improving. However, in some cities you can see more cyclists for short commutes, especially among students and delivery workers.

× Yes I do. I uh, achieved by a kite club colour pinks.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a pink bike that I got from a kite club.

The student used incorrect verbs and sentence structure. 'Do' is present tense but question asked about childhood (past), so use past tense 'did' (Problem type ID 6 or 5; choose 6 Present tense issue vs Past tense issue — the main error is tense mismatch and verb choice). 'Achieved by a kite club' is ungrammatical: 'achieved' is wrong verb for receiving an item; use 'got' or 'had' and specify possession: 'I had a pink bike.' Also 'colour pinks' is incorrect adjective/noun order and pluralization; use 'pink' as adjective. Correct sentence: 'Yes, I did. I had a pink bike that I got from a kite club.' Suggestion: Use past tense for past experiences, choose appropriate verbs (have/had, get/got), and place adjectives before nouns. Replace filler 'uh' when speaking in formal answers. This maps to Grammar Problem Type ID:6 Present tense issue.