Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 表現を自然で時制に注意し、文を論理的に組み立てること。具体的には過去の出来事を述べる際は過去形を一貫して使い、理由や状況を短い補足文で付け加えると良いです。また“daddy”はカジュアルなので試験では“my father”のほうが無難です。さらに回答は3〜4文で完結にまとめ、不要な語の省略や文法ミスを避けましょう。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child because my father bought it for me. I used to ride it to visit my friends and play in the park almost every weekend.

제안: 理由を説明する際に文法（主語や動詞）と語順を正しくし、具体的な状況や頻度を加えること。接続語（for example, because, so）を使って論理を明確にし、文を2〜3文でまとめて下さい。語彙は“ride a bike”だけでなく“cycling”や“commute by bike”なども使えます。

예시: Yes, I do. Bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute to school or work. For example, I often see students cycling to campus and people doing short shopping trips by bike.

× When I am poor, my daddy gave me a bike.

✓ When I was young, my daddy gave me a bike.

The original sentence mixes present tense 'am' with past event 'gave'. Use past tense 'was' to match the past action. Also 'poor' is incorrect for age; 'young' fits the intended meaning. Suggestion: ensure tense consistency and choose the correct adjective for meaning.

× I think bikes are popular in my country because when I go to school use my bike and I ride a bike to go shopping.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because I use my bike to go to school and I ride it to go shopping.

The original sentence has a missing subject before 'use my bike' and repeats 'a bike' awkwardly. Fix by adding the subject 'I' and replacing the second 'a bike' with the pronoun 'it' for cohesion. Also ensure parallel structure: 'use my bike to go to school' and 'ride it to go shopping'.