Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and directly answers the question with relevant details, but it could be improved by using a stronger topic sentence, varying vocabulary, and adding one specific detail to make it more vivid. Keep responses concise (up to 5 sentences) and use a linking word when adding a second idea (for example, "and" or "so").

예시: Yes — I had a small, bright-red bicycle when I was a child. I rode it almost every day to visit friends and to cycle the two kilometres to school, so it became my main way of getting around.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has many hesitations and some unclear phrasing. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (like "umm"), use precise vocabulary (e.g., "bicycles" vs "motorbikes"), and organize supporting points with linking words ("however", "because", "for example"). Provide one or two specific reasons or an example to support your view.

예시: I think motorbikes are much more popular than traditional bicycles in my country. For example, many people prefer motorbikes because they are faster and can carry groceries or passengers, so they are more practical for commuting to work.

× Umm the traditional bikes are lot that popular, but motorbikes are really popular in my country.

✓ Umm traditional bikes are not that popular, but motorbikes are really popular in my country.

The original uses incorrect word order and missing negation: 'are lot that popular' is ungrammatical. Use the quantifier phrase 'not that' before an adjective to show lesser degree: 'not that popular'. Also remove the definite article 'the' before 'traditional bikes' unless referring to a specific group. Suggestion: place 'not' before the degree phrase and use correct word order: 'not that popular'.

× Umm such kind of bikes umm both have uh speeds and umm can carry more stuff umm and people use it to uh go to work.

✓ Those kinds of bikes both have higher speeds and can carry more stuff, so people use them to go to work.

The original is ungrammatical and informal: 'such kind of bikes' should be 'those kinds of bikes' or 'that kind of bike'; 'both have uh speeds' is vague and awkward—use 'higher speeds' or 'greater speed'; pronoun agreement: 'people use it' should be 'people use them' to match plural 'bikes'. Also link clauses properly: use 'so' to show reason. Suggestion: use clear noun phrases, correct plural references, and proper conjunctions to form coherent sentences.