Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (use past tense consistently), remove filler words, and make the response more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. For example, say you “had” a bike, describe its colour and training wheels, and explain briefly why you used them.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a pink bicycle with training wheels when I was a child, so I could learn to balance safely. Because the training wheels prevented falls, I felt more confident riding around the neighborhood.

제안: Make the statement more natural and specific: use plural nouns and clearer linking words, and add one specific reason or example. Begin with a direct opinion, then support it with a reason and a brief example or comparison.

예시: I don't think so. Bicycles are mainly used for leisure rather than daily commuting in my city, because public transport and cars are more convenient. For instance, people usually cycle in parks or on weekends instead of riding to work.

× Of course, when I was young, I have a pink bicycle and it attached the extra wheel in the back.

✓ Of course, when I was young, I had a pink bicycle and it had an extra wheel attached to the back.

The sentence describes a past situation, so present tense verbs 'have' and 'attached' are incorrect. Use past simple 'had' for possession. 'Attached' should be in passive or participle form with 'had'—'had an extra wheel attached' or 'it had an extra wheel attached to the back' is natural. Also reorder to 'attached to the back' for clarity.

× Like, uh, when the kid practice to bicycle, we have the little wheels to support your balance and.

✓ For example, when kids practice riding a bicycle, we use the little wheels to support their balance.

Multiple errors: 'kid' should be plural 'kids' to match general meaning (singular/plural and agreement). 'Practice' as a verb for plural subject should be 'practice'. After 'practice' we use the -ing form 'riding' not the infinitive 'to bicycle'. 'We have the little wheels' is awkward; use 'we use' for habitual action. Pronoun 'your' is inconsistent with 'kids'—use 'their'. Remove trailing conjunction. Overall restructure for natural English.

× Actually, I think bicycle is just the thing that we have when, uh, we have a leisure time, but not the main transportation in our city.

✓ Actually, I think bicycles are just something we use during leisure time, but they are not the main mode of transportation in our city.

'Bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' when speaking generally. 'A leisure time' is uncountable or should be 'leisure time' without article. 'The thing that we have when we have a leisure time' is wordy; 'something we use during leisure time' is more natural. 'Main transportation' should be 'main mode of transportation'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'bicycles are' and 'they are not'.