Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is correct but very short and lacks detail. To meet the evaluation criteria, begin with a clear topic sentence and then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because, so, although, when). Keep the total to no more than five sentences and use a bit more varied vocabulary (e.g., bicycle, ride, neighbourhood, learn).

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child because my parents bought it for me when I was seven. I used to ride it to school and around the neighbourhood, which helped me become more independent and fit.

제안: The student’s reply did not answer the examiner’s question and is inappropriate for the question asked. Instead, respond directly with a topic sentence stating your opinion, then add one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, for instance, therefore). Use vocabulary relevant to transportation and popularity (e.g., cycling, commuters, leisure, infrastructure). Keep answers concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For instance, cities with good bike lanes have a visible cycling culture, especially among students and young professionals.

× Do you have anyone?

✓ Are bicycles popular?

The student's reply 'Do you have anyone?' is inappropriate for the examiner's question and uses the pronoun 'anyone' incorrectly in this context. The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' so the student should answer about the popularity of bikes, not ask about possession of people. This is a sentence-choice and pronoun error: 'anyone' refers to people and does not fit with 'bikes'. Also the form 'Do you have' asks possession, not opinion. To correct it, provide an opinion about popularity and use the appropriate subject 'bikes' or 'they' (third person plural). Example corrections: 'Yes, they are popular in my country.' or 'No, bicycles are not very popular in my country.' This maintains subject-verb agreement and matches the question's topic and tense.