Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too short and not appropriate. Begin with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question and then add 1–2 specific supporting details (e.g., who you rode with, how often you used it, or a brief memory). Keep responses natural, avoid greetings like “Hi,” and limit to up to 5 sentences. Use linking words (for example, “and,” “because,” “so”) to make it coherent.

예시: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride around my neighborhood with friends, and I remember learning to ride in the park near my house. Because I practiced a lot, I became confident riding on busy streets by the time I was ten.

제안: This reply does not answer the question at all. Provide a direct opinion as the topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons or examples (e.g., usage for commuting, recreation, government initiatives). Use linking words (such as “because,” “for example,” or “however”) to connect ideas and keep the response within 1–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have built more cycling lanes recently, and you can see many students and office workers cycling to work during peak hours.

× Hi, yes.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student reply 'Hi, yes.' is not a complete or appropriate answer to the examiner's question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26): the response lacks the subject and auxiliary needed for a past simple yes/no answer. Correct form for this question is 'Yes, I did.' which uses the auxiliary 'did' and subject 'I' to form a grammatically complete response in the past simple tense. Suggestion: Always respond with a full clause when asked about past experiences, e.g. 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn’t'.

× Answer questions.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

The student answer 'Answer questions.' is not a relevant or grammatical response to the examiner's question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26): the reply is an imperative phrase and does not address the question. A correct response should state an opinion in the present tense, for example 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country.' or 'I think bikes are quite popular because...'. Suggestion: Provide a direct answer with subject and verb that matches the question tense (present simple) and optionally add a brief reason.