Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Вы не ответили на этот вопрос. В экзамене Part 1 важно отвечать непосредственно на поставленный вопрос. Дайте краткий тематический ответ (да/нет), затем при необходимости добавьте 1–2 конкретных поддерживающих подробности, используя связующие слова для плавности (например, "so", "because", "also"). Ограничьте ответ 1–3 предложениями и избегайте пауз и заполнителей («uh»).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was eight, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day.

제안: Ответ понятен, но есть грамматические ошибки, лишние заполнители («uh») и нет плавных связующих слов. Следует начать с чёткого тематического предложения, исправить грамматику (например, 'Russia is a very sports-oriented country'), использовать связки ('because', 'for example') и добавить одну конкретную деталь для веса утверждения. Избегайте повторов ('bikes, bicycles') и держите не больше 3–4 предложений.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in Russia because the country promotes sports widely. For example, there are many cycling clubs and public bike lanes in large cities, so more people use bikes for exercise and short trips.

× I think they are because I'm from Russia.

✓ I think so because I'm from Russia.

The original sentence uses 'they are' without a clear referent; 'so' is more natural to refer back to 'bikes are popular'. Use 'so' for brevity and clarity. Suggestion: replace 'they are' with 'so' or repeat 'bikes are popular' if emphasis is needed.

× It's really sport oriented country.

✓ It's a really sport-oriented country.

The phrase needs an article 'a' before the noun 'country' and the compound adjective 'sport-oriented' requires a hyphen. Also 'really' modifies the adjective so word order should be 'a really sport-oriented country'. Suggestion: include the article and hyphenate the compound adjective.

× We have many facilities which uh, provide uh, sport activities and bikes, bicycles is one of main parts of it.

✓ We have many facilities that provide sports activities, and bicycles are one of the main parts of this infrastructure.

Multiple issues: use 'that' or 'which' appropriately (restrictive clause uses 'that'), avoid filler 'uh'. 'Sport activities' is more natural as 'sports activities'. The subject 'bicycles' is plural so use 'are'. Also 'one of main parts' lacks the article 'the'. 'It' is vague, better 'this infrastructure' or 'these facilities'. Suggestion: remove fillers, match plural subjects and verbs, add articles, and clarify the referent.