Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve tense accuracy, expand briefly with a topic sentence and one specific supporting detail. Use past tense and avoid one-word answers. For example, start with a clear subject sentence, then add when or why it was important.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I received it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I rode it every day to visit my friends and explore the neighborhood.

제안: Improve grammar, use correct subject-verb agreement and plural forms, and make the answer more specific with linking words. Begin with a clear opinion sentence, then add reasons or examples using linking words like "because" or "for example." Keep to a maximum of about 3–4 short sentences.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use them to travel to nearby markets or to commute within the city, especially in areas with heavy traffic.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past-tense question ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the student should answer in the past tense. 'Have' is present tense and does not agree with the past question. Use the past auxiliary 'did' plus the base verb: 'Yes, I did.' If you want to be more specific you can say 'Yes, I did. I had a bike.' This ensures subject-verb agreement and correct tense alignment.

× Yeah, it is very popular in our country and many peoples are using for surrounding areas or they are roaming in our city.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country, and many people use them to get around nearby areas or to ride around the city.

Multiple errors: 1) Subject-verb agreement and reference: The student began with 'it is very popular' but must refer to 'bikes' (plural), so use 'bikes are.' 2) Incorrect plural: 'peoples' is incorrect when referring to many people; use 'people.' 3) Incorrect verb form and structure: 'are using for surrounding areas' is ungrammatical. Use simple present 'use' for habitual actions and the correct preposition 'to get around' or 'to travel in' for purpose. 4) Pronoun reference: use 'them' to refer back to 'bikes.' 5) Word choice: 'roaming' is possible but 'ride around' or 'get around' is more natural for bikes. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent (simple present) for general facts and habits, ensure plural subjects take plural verbs, use correct plural nouns, and use appropriate prepositions for purpose ('to get around').