Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question, which is good. To improve, make it slightly more natural and add a brief reason or minor detail to enrich the response (but keep it under five sentences). Also avoid absolute negatives without context—soften with a short explanation. Use a linking phrase when adding the detail.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a very small apartment and we didn’t have space to store one. However, I sometimes rode other children’s bikes in the neighborhood.

제안: Your answer communicates the main idea but has pronunciation errors, disfluencies (uh, um), repetition and some awkward phrasing. To improve: 1) Remove filler words and avoid repeating the same point. 2) Use one clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail with a linking word (e.g., “because” or “for example”). 3) Correct pronunciation (e.g., 'bikes') and tighten sentences to sound more natural.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them as their main means of transportation. For example, it’s common to see adults commuting to work on bicycles, especially in smaller cities where traffic is heavy.

× I do think that bites really PO popular in my country, uh, because our regular transport is bike in my country.

✓ I do think that bikes are really popular in my country because our regular mode of transport is bicycles in my country.

The original sentence has singular/plural inconsistency: 'bites' is incorrect (typo) and 'bike' used where plural or a count noun is needed. Use 'bikes' (plural) and 'bicycles' or 'bikes' for consistency. Also replace 'regular transport is bike' with 'regular mode of transport is bicycles' for grammatical correctness and natural phrasing. Suggestion: ensure nouns that refer to general items are plural when speaking generally (bikes, bicycles) and use 'mode of transport' for the concept of transportation.

× Most uh, adult people, you know, ride bikes.

✓ Most adults, you know, ride bikes.

The phrase 'adult people' is awkward; the correct adjective-to-noun form is 'adults' (noun) rather than 'adult people'. Use the plural noun 'adults' to refer to grown people. Suggestion: prefer 'adults' instead of 'adult people' for natural English.

× So yeah, it's it is really popular in my country.

✓ So yeah, it is really popular in my country.

The original has redundant 'it's it is' causing a sentence structure/repetition error. Remove the duplicate to produce a single correct subject-verb contraction 'it's' or the full form 'it is'. Suggestion: avoid repeating the same subject and verb twice.

× No, I never had a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I never had a bike when I was a child.

This sentence is grammatically correct for past tense; no change needed. It properly uses the past simple 'had' to refer to possession in childhood. Included for completeness.