Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc theo cấu trúc: câu chủ đề + chi tiết hỗ trợ (thời điểm, người liên quan, cảm xúc, kết quả). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì, động từ thiếu, đại từ không chính xác) và loại bỏ thông tin lặp. Dùng tối đa 3-4 câu. Ví dụ cụ thể: nói rõ bạn không có xe khi nhỏ, ai đã tặng/không tặng, khi nào và cảm xúc kèm kết quả.

예시: I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Recently my mother offered to buy me one, which made me very excited at first. However, a few weeks later I decided not to keep it because I rarely had time to ride. In the end, I gave it to a younger cousin who needed it more.

제안: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích với lý do cụ thể và dùng từ vựng chính xác. Sửa lỗi phát âm/viết (bikes, popular, students, ride), ngữ pháp (so sánh, lý do), và tránh câu lặp. Hãy dùng liên từ (because, so, therefore) để liên kết ý. Giữ 2-4 câu và nêu ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: học sinh đi học, chi phí thấp).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. Many students use bicycles to commute because they are inexpensive and convenient for short distances. For example, I often see students cycling to school in the morning to avoid traffic and save money.

× When I was young I didn't have a bike but several months ago my mom what my mom bother me I feel very excited but however a few weeks later

✓ When I was young, I didn't have a bike, but several months ago my mom bought me one. I felt very excited, but a few weeks later ...

The original sentence has multiple sentence-structure problems: missing verbs ('bought' was replaced by 'what'), run-on sentence without proper clause division, incorrect tense consistency, and unclear meaning. Break into separate sentences and use the correct past tense verb 'bought' for the completed action. Add commas to separate clauses and maintain past tense for feelings ('I felt'). Suggestion: write one idea per clause, use proper past-tense verbs for past events, and include necessary punctuation.

× I think biased ear popular in my country, especially with students because students are young too young to write ride motorbike.

✓ I think bicycles are popular in my country, especially with students because they are too young to ride motorbikes.

The sentence contains incorrect word choices and adjective/adverb errors: 'biased ear' is a mispronunciation/typo for 'bicycles are'; 'write ride' mixes words; 'motorbike' should be plural 'motorbikes' when speaking generally. Also pronoun reference improved by using 'they' for students and adjective placement 'too young to ride'. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary ('bicycles', 'ride'), ensure subject pronouns match, and keep parallel structure.

× So the bikes is the bikes are shorter.

✓ So bikes are smaller.

The original has subject-verb agreement problems and redundancy: 'the bikes is' mixes singular verb with plural noun, and repeating 'the bikes are' is redundant. Also 'shorter' needs a comparison object; 'smaller' is a better descriptive adjective when no comparison is given. Suggestion: choose correct plural verb 'are' for 'bikes' and avoid unnecessary repetition; use clear adjectives ('smaller').