Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and give a fuller response: start with a direct answer (Yes/No), then add one or two specific supporting details and a linking word. Avoid repeating the examiner's question. Keep it within 3–4 short sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven — it was a small red bicycle with training wheels. Because I lived near a park, I rode it almost every day after school and learned to ride without the training wheels within a month.

제안: Structure your answer more clearly: give a topic sentence, then two specific reasons linked with connectors (for example, 'because' and 'also'), and avoid filler words and repetition. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'brands', 'advertisements') and limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and leisure. For instance, there are numerous brands offering different models and colours to suit various needs. Also, celebrities often appear in advertisements, which helps make cycling trendy among younger people.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child? I did.

✓ I did. (No change needed for meaning; better to answer: Yes, I did.)

The student's response 'Did you have a bike when you were a child? I did.' repeats the question and then gives a short answer. The primary issue is conversational phrasing rather than strict grammar. For clarity and naturalness, respond with 'Yes, I did.' or 'I did.' alone. Suggestion: Use 'Yes, I did.' to clearly affirm the question.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. We have different uh, companies, different colours, different models and even the the movie stars and other people in the media industry uh, act in different advertisement to promote different types of bikes.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. We have different companies, different colours, different models, and even movie stars and other people in the media industry act in different advertisements to promote different types of bicycles.

Multiple issues: 'bikes' is acceptable but 'bicycles' is more formal; repeated filler 'the the' should be removed. 'Different advertisement' uses singular 'advertisement' with 'different' and plural items—use plural 'advertisements'. Also remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'movie stars' and 'the media industry' is fine as 'the media industry' but 'in the the movie stars' was incorrect. Suggestions: Remove filler words, use plural where referring to multiple items ('advertisements'), and avoid repeated words. Use consistent noun form ('bicycles' or 'bikes') and parallel structure with commas between listed items.