Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and grammatically correct, but it is very short and could be expanded with one or two specific supporting details to show fluency and coherence. Add a brief topic sentence followed by a linked detail (for example where you rode it or who taught you) and keep it to up to 3–4 sentences. Use a linking word (e.g., “and” or “so”) to connect ideas naturally.

예시: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it every afternoon around my neighborhood with my friends, and it was how I learned to be independent. My parents bought it for my eighth birthday, so I have many happy memories of cycling to the park.

제안: Your answer expresses an opinion but is brief and a little unclear. Give a clear topic sentence stating whether bikes are popular, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word (e.g., “because” or “however”). Mention concrete factors (such as infrastructure, traffic, culture) and, if appropriate, a short comparison or example to strengthen your point.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country, mainly because our cities are crowded and traffic is heavy. As a result, there is limited safe space for cycling and few dedicated bike lanes, so many people prefer motorbikes or cars for commuting. However, cycling is becoming more common in some parks and university areas where there is more space.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence uses the auxiliary 'did' together with the past-tense verb 'have', which is redundant. In simple past affirmative sentences, use the past-tense verb alone (I had) rather than did + base verb. Suggestion: use 'I had' for clear, natural past-tense statements.

× I don't think so because we don't have enough space to have a bike for each citizen.

✓ I don't think so because we don't have enough space for a bike for every citizen.

The original mixes 'to have a bike for each citizen' which is awkward. The issue relates to quantifier and preposition use: use 'for' before the noun indicating purpose or recipient and use 'every' or 'each' consistently; 'a bike for every citizen' is more natural than 'to have a bike for each citizen'. Suggestion: say 'enough space for a bike for every citizen' or 'enough space for each person to have a bike' for clarity.