Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g. "Yes, I did"), then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct past-tense use and clarify unclear phrases (e.g. the bike brand). Avoid irrelevant or confusing words. Use linking words if you add more detail.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a blue bicycle made by a company called Blender, and I also owned a matching helmet from the same brand. It was my main way to get around the neighborhood, so I rode it almost every day after school.

제안: Give a clearer, fully developed response with correct grammar and complete sentences. Start with a direct opinion sentence, then add 2 specific reasons with linking words (for instance, 'because' and 'furthermore') and a short example or result. Check comparative forms ('cheaper than') and finish the last sentence.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many commuters use motorcycles or scooters to avoid traffic, and furthermore they save money on fuel and parking. As a result, bicycles and scooters are a common sight in cities during rush hour.

× Of course I have a bike and it's a blender company and I have also same companies helmet.

✓ Of course I had a bike; it was from Blender Company, and I also had a helmet from the same company.

Multiple issues: 1) Tense: The examiner asked about childhood (past), so verbs should be past tense (had, was) — relates to 'Past tense issue' (ID 5) and 'Present tense issue' (ID 6). 2) Subject-verb agreement: 'it's a blender company' is incorrect meaning and form — use 'it was from Blender Company' to show origin (relates to 'Subject-verb agreement errors' ID 27). 3) Article and word choice: 'same companies helmet' should be 'the same company's helmet' or 'a helmet from the same company' — corrected to 'a helmet from the same company' to show possession and correct article use (relates to 'Article errors' ID 22 and 'Incorrect use of pronouns/possessives' ID 12). Suggestion: Match past tense when speaking about past events, use correct possessive or prepositional phrase ('from the same company'), and ensure word order and articles are appropriate.

× Undoubtedly bikes are quite important in my country because it's easy to use and also it's inexpensive than cars.

✓ Undoubtedly, bikes are quite important in my country because they are easy to use and less expensive than cars.

Issues: 1) Pronoun/subject agreement: 'it's' refers to singular but 'bikes' is plural; use 'they are' (relates to 'Incorrect use of pronouns' ID 12 and 'Subject-verb agreement errors' ID 27). 2) Comparative form: 'it's inexpensive than cars' is incorrect; use 'less expensive than cars' or 'cheaper than cars' (relates to 'Comparative and superlative errors' ID 25). 3) Article/word order: add a comma after 'Undoubtedly' for clarity and use plural agreement throughout. Suggestion: Keep pronouns consistent with the noun number and use proper comparative structures ('less expensive' or 'cheaper').

× Moreover in hurry, people prefer to use bikes rather than cars because it's difficult to ride a

✓ Moreover, when people are in a hurry, they prefer to use bikes rather than cars because it is difficult to drive a car in traffic.

Problems: 1) Sentence fragment: original ends abruptly ('difficult to ride a') — complete the thought (relates to 'Sentence structure errors' ID 26 and 'Sentence without a verb' ID 23). 2) Phrase and preposition: 'in hurry' should be 'in a hurry' (relates to 'Incorrect use of prepositions' ID 11 and 'Article errors' ID 22). 3) Pronoun/number and verb: use 'people ... they prefer' and 'it is' for singular impersonal statements (relates to 'Incorrect use of pronouns' ID 12). 4) Word choice: 'ride' typically applies to bikes or motorcycles; for cars use 'drive' — clarified to 'drive a car in traffic.' Suggestion: Complete sentences, use correct articles ('in a hurry'), match verbs and pronouns to subjects, and choose verbs appropriate to the vehicle type.