Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unrelated and unclear. Give a direct, relevant response that begins with a topic sentence (yes/no or brief statement) and then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was about six, and I used it to visit friends and go to school. Because our neighborhood was quiet and safe, I rode almost every day during the summer.

제안: The reply is confusing and off-topic. Start with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons or examples and linking words (for example, because, therefore, however). Keep sentences simple and relevant to bike popularity.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap and avoid traffic. However, popularity varies by region: rural areas tend to use motorbikes or cars more.

× Remain came during stressful situation.

✓ I became tense during stressful situations.

The original sentence has incorrect word choice and word order. 'Remain came' is not grammatical; the intended meaning is that the speaker became tense or remained calm during stress. Also 'stressful situation' needs an article or plural. The corrected sentence uses a clear subject + verb ('I became') and the adjective 'tense' to express the state; 'during stressful situations' is more natural. Suggestion: use a clear subject and a correct verb (become/remain) and match singular/plural for 'situation.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× To follow global airline boost you.

✓ Because of the global increase in air travel, bicycles have become more popular.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear in structure and word choice. 'To follow global airline boost you' lacks a proper subject, verb, and prepositions. The examiner asked about bicycle popularity; the corrected sentence provides a cause ('Because of the global increase in air travel') and a main clause relevant to the question ('bicycles have become more popular'). Suggestion: ensure sentences have a clear subject and verb, use appropriate prepositional phrases (because of, in), and make the content relevant to the question. Grammar problem type ID:26