Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答需要时态和语法更准确，句子更自然流畅，并且增加少量具体细节。注意主句时态一致（过去时），避免重复和词序错误。可以用一到两句补充说明频率或感受，并使用连接词使表述更连贯。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents and I often rode it to the park near our house after dinner, and I enjoyed racing my friends there.

제안: 内容需要更清晰且用词准确。纠正词汇错误（writing->riding），避免填充词（uh），并把想表达的时间、频率或例子说完整。用连接词组织句子，给出具体例子或个人经历以支持观点。

예시: Yes, cycling is very popular in my country. Many people cycle to exercise after work, and for example, last month I joined a weekend cycling group that meets at the riverside.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

原句用現在式 “have” 與考官問題 “Did you have... when you were a child?” 時態不一致。應與過去時對應，改為過去式 “had”。建議：回答過去的經歷時使用過去時（had）。

× When I was a child I like to buy bike after dinner with my parents.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to ride my bike after dinner with my parents.

原句使用現在式 “like” 與不定式 “to buy bike” 與兒時情景不符，且動詞搭配錯誤（通常說 “ride a bike” 而不是 “buy bike”）。應使用過去式 “liked” 並用正確動詞短語 “ride my bike”。建議：描述過去習慣用 “used to” 或過去簡單時（liked / would）。此外名詞前加不定冠詞 “a”。

× We often go to the park near my house.

✓ We often went to the park near my house.

句子描述過去習慣，但用現在式 “go”。應使用過去式 “went” 來與上下文一致。建議：敘述過去習慣用過去式（often went / used to go）。

× Yes, writing is a popular sport in my country.

✓ Yes, riding is a popular sport in my country.

原句將 “writing”（寫作）誤用為動名詞，正確應為 “riding”（騎車/騎行）。此處談論運動類型應使用正確單詞。建議：注意相近拼寫的單詞差異，將 “writing” 改為 “riding”。

× Some people uh, do some, uh, riding exercise after their work uh, so last month I going to.

✓ Some people do some riding exercise after their work, and last month I went too.

原句混合現在式與不完整的過去式表達：“last month I going to” 非法。應把描述習慣的現在式 “Some people do...” 保留，並把過去事件改為過去式 “I went too” （或 “I went as well”）。另外 “after their work” 更自然可說 “after work”。建議：避免在一句話中混用時態；描述特定過去事件使用過去式（went），並簡化短語為 “after work”。