Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: The student simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence about whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., age you learned to ride, who taught you, how often you rode). Keep responses concise (no more than 5 sentences) and use linking words like “and” or “because” if adding reasons.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a red bicycle when I was seven. My father taught me to ride it in our neighborhood park, and I rode it to school almost every day until I was twelve.

제안: The answer addresses the question directly and gives a reason, but it has minor repetition and informal phrasing. To improve, remove redundant phrases, correct tense and capitalization, and add one specific example or comparison to make the response more vivid. Use a linking word like “because” or “so” to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, they are becoming increasingly popular because traffic and parking are getting worse in cities. For example, many people now switch to bicycles for short commutes, and local authorities have added more bike lanes to accommodate them.

× Yeah, definitely. I see I've been seeing more and more bikes Lately, mainly because it's getting harder and harder to drive and park.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I've been seeing more and more bikes lately, mainly because it is getting harder and harder to drive and park.

The student mixed present simple 'I see' with present perfect continuous 'I've been seeing'; this is redundant. Use the present perfect continuous 'I've been seeing' alone to describe a recent trend that started in the past and continues to now. 'Lately' should be lowercase. Also expand the contraction 'it's' to 'it is' is optional, but retaining 'it's' is acceptable; here 'it is getting harder' clarifies the ongoing change. Suggestion: say 'I've been seeing more and more bikes lately' to be grammatically consistent and natural.