Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Улучшите время глаголов, грамматику и связность. В ответе вы использовали настоящее время («do») вместо прошедшего и были ошибки в структуре («purple color», «I like to. Write and watch charming views»). Дайте ясное вступление (тема), затем одно-два поддерживающих предложения с конкретными деталями и свяжите их логически (например: "I had a purple bike when I was a child. I enjoyed riding it to..."), не больше 3–4 предложений. Также используйте подходящие фразы для описания воспоминаний и действий (liked, used to ride, enjoyed looking at the scenery).

예시: I had a purple bike when I was a child. I loved riding it around my neighborhood and to the nearby park. I often enjoyed looking at the charming views along the river while cycling, which made those rides very relaxing.

제안: Сделайте ответ более развернутым и точным, добавив конкретные причины и примеры. Свяжите идею причину–следствие с помощью связок (for example, because, so). Избегайте тавтологии («roads, streets and parks») — выбирайте более естественные наборы слов. Можно также указать разницу в использовании среди возрастных групп или городов и привести маленький статистический или личный пример.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among teenagers and young adults. For example, many students use bicycles to commute to school because traffic and parking are difficult in cities. In addition, cycling is common in parks and along rivers for exercise and leisure.

× Yes I do. It was purple color and I like to. Write and watch charming views.

✓ Yes, I did. It was purple and I liked it. I would ride it and enjoy looking at charming views.

The student is asked about the past (childhood), so present tense 'do' and 'like' are incorrect; use past tense 'did' and 'liked'. 'Was purple color' is ungrammatical: use 'was purple' or 'was a purple color'. 'I like to. Write and watch charming views.' appears as sentence fragments and incorrect verbs: 'write' is wrong verb here; likely meant 'ride'. Combine actions into coherent past activities: 'I would ride it and enjoy looking at charming views.' Suggestions: Use past simple for past facts and habits ('did', 'was', 'liked'); choose correct verbs ('ride' not 'write'); link actions with conjunctions or modal 'would' for habitual past actions; ensure complete sentences with subject and verb.

× I see a lot of teenagers and young people who ride a bike on roads, streets and parks.

✓ I see a lot of teenagers and young people who ride bikes on roads, streets and in parks.

Mixing singular 'a bike' with plural 'a lot of teenagers and young people' is inconsistent. Use the plural 'bikes' to match the plural subject. Also preposition 'in parks' is more natural than just 'parks' when listing locations. Suggestions: Match number between subject and object (plural with plural), and use correct prepositions for locations ('on roads', 'on streets', 'in parks').