Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer direct, grammatically correct and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “No, I didn’t have a bike as a child.”), then give one or two concise reasons with specific details and linking words. Use correct verb tenses and simpler vocabulary to avoid confusion. Limit to 2–4 sentences. Focus on clarity: say you lived in a big city, traffic safety concerns, and lack of safe space to ride.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a busy city where traffic was heavy, so my parents didn’t feel it was safe for me to ride. Also, we lacked nearby parks or quiet streets where I could practice.

제안: Answer the question directly and use clear reasons with examples. Start with a short opinion (Yes/No/It depends), then support it with 1–2 specific reasons and a brief example. Use linking words like “because” and “however.” Correct common errors: say “popular,” “city centres,” and avoid contradictory phrases. Keep responses to under five sentences.

예시: I don’t think biking is very popular in my country, especially in city centres. This is because many urban areas lack bike lanes and local policies do not encourage cycling. However, cycling is more common in smaller towns where roads are quieter.

× I don't have a bike because like when I live in big cities so there's a lot of traffic and also like the cars are too good distances so that wine will not allow to write a bite that is why I don't have a bite

✓ I didn't have a bike because when I lived in big cities there was a lot of traffic, and the distances were too great, so my parents would not allow me to ride a bike. That is why I didn't have a bike.

Tense consistency and verb form errors: The student mixes present and past tenses (says 'I don't have' and 'when I live' while referring to childhood). Use past tense for actions in the past: 'didn't have', 'lived', 'was', 'were'. Also corrected awkward phrasing and word choice ('cars are too good distances' -> 'distances were too great'; 'wine will not allow' -> 'my parents would not allow me'), and fixed 'write a bite' to 'ride a bike'. Suggestion: Keep the past tense for all clauses about past events and choose clear subject references (e.g., 'my parents') and correct verb collocations ('ride a bike').

× I don't think by populous in my country because like the city centres we have not the governments are not allowed to ride a bike or a bicycle.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because in city centres the government does not allow people to ride bicycles.

Tense and word choice errors: The sentence uses incorrect words ('by populous', 'we have not the governments are not allowed') and mixes plural/singular agreement. Use present simple for general facts: 'I don't think bikes are popular'. Correct subject-verb agreement: 'the government does not allow'. Use correct prepositions and word order: 'in city centres' and 'allow people to ride bicycles'. Suggestion: Use clear nouns and correct verb forms for general statements: 'the government does not allow people to ride bicycles in city centres.'

× So that is why the people normally did rise a bike but on

✓ So that is why people normally did not ride a bike.

Incorrect past tense and verb form: 'did rise a bike' is wrong; the correct past form is 'did not ride a bike' (use base verb after 'did'). Also remove the trailing 'but on' which is incomplete. Suggestion: Use 'did not' + base verb for past negative statements and ensure sentences are complete.