Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer repeats the examiner's question and switches person (you/I) which makes it unclear. To improve: answer directly with a topic sentence about yourself, then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Keep sentences natural and avoid repetition. For example, begin with “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” then explain why or give a short memory, using words like because, so, or when.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven because my parents wanted me to learn balance early. It was my favorite toy and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and irrelevant fragments (e.g., “My lost my”). To improve: start with a clear opinion (Yes/No) as a topic sentence, then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words such as because, for example, and so. Refer correctly to types of bikes (bicycles vs motorbikes) if relevant, and use correct subject-verb agreement and articles.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use motorbikes to commute to work since they are faster in traffic, whereas bicycles are common for students and short errands in smaller towns.

× Do you have a bike when you were a kid?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a kid?

The question refers to the past (when you were a kid), so the auxiliary verb must be in the past form 'did' not 'do'. Use 'did' + base verb for past simple questions. Suggestion: Use 'Did' for past questions and keep the main verb in base form: 'Did you have...'.

× My lost my.

✓ I lost mine.

This fragment has incorrect word order and pronoun use. 'My lost my' is ungrammatical. If the student means they no longer have the bike they owned, use the subject pronoun 'I' + past verb 'lost' + possessive pronoun 'mine'. Suggestion: Use 'I lost mine' or 'I used to have a bike but I lost it.'

× My popular bike in my popular bike in 125 because the engine is good, the bike is rapidly faster and people is good.

✓ My most popular bike is the YBR 125 because the engine is good, the bike is quite fast, and people like it.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect article usage, missing verb 'is', wrong adjective order, incorrect comparative/adverb usage, and wrong verb agreement. I interpreted '125' as a model number; include a noun like 'YBR 125' or '125cc model'. Use 'My most popular bike is...' or 'The most popular bike is...' to introduce the subject. Use 'the engine is good' (correct), 'the bike is quite fast' (use adverb 'quite' or 'very' before adjective), and 'people like it' (correct subject-verb agreement and object pronoun). Suggestion: Keep consistent verb 'is' for descriptions, use correct adverb placement ('quite fast' not 'rapidly faster'), and use 'people like it' instead of 'people is good'.