Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, use correct past tense and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two brief supporting details (e.g., who gave it to you, where you rode it, or a short memory). Keep it within 2–3 sentences and correct grammar (e.g., 'I did have' → 'I had').

예시: I had a small bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was six, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every evening.

제안: Answer directly, use plural/singular agreement and clearer phrasing. Start with a topic sentence (Yes, they are popular), then give two specific reasons with linking words (for example, because/also). Avoid unclear phrases like 'the meanings have come transportation.' Be concise and use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'affordable', 'promotes physical activity').

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in the Philippines. For example, they are affordable for many people and they also promote physical activity, so many commuters and students choose to cycle.

× Yes, I do have a bike, a little one when I was a little child.

✓ Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past (Did you have...), so use past tense 'had' instead of present 'do have' (present tense issue). Also 'a little one' is informal; 'small bike' is clearer. Remove redundant 'a little child'—use 'a child'. Suggestion: match verb tense to question and simplify adjectives.

× Yes, bikes is very popular here in the Philippines because it's the meanings have come transportation and it's less expensive and it's also helping us or helping everyone to be active, physically active through biking.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular here in the Philippines because they are a common means of transportation, they are less expensive, and they also help people stay physically active through biking.

Multiple errors: 'bikes is' should be 'bikes are' (subject-verb agreement). 'it's the meanings have come transportation' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'they are a common means of transportation' (sentence structure and word choice). Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to bikes (pronoun use). Replace 'it's also helping us or helping everyone to be active, physically active through biking' with 'they also help people stay physically active through biking' to use correct verb form and clearer phrasing. Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree in number, use clear noun phrases ('means of transportation'), and use consistent pronouns.