Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, grammatically correct and more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two concise supporting details using correct tense and linking words. Correct common mistakes (tense, word choice, articles) and avoid redundancy. For example, say when you had the bike, why you liked it, and a brief memory. Keep it to up to 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about eight years old, and it quickly became my favorite toy because I loved riding around the neighborhood. I remember riding with my friends every afternoon, which made those years fun and active.

제안: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and specific supporting reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore, however) and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles, clearer vocabulary). Give 2–3 concise reasons or an example to support your opinion. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are inexpensive and easy to maintain. For example, bikes do not require fuel or high taxes, so many people use them for short trips and commuting. As a result, cycling is a common and practical choice in cities and rural areas.

× Yes I do. I had a bike when I was in turbid and it was a favorite part of my life because I like to ride bike.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was in third grade, and it was a favorite part of my childhood because I liked to ride my bike.

Errors and fixes: 1) 'Yes I do' should match the past-question 'Did you have...?' so use past tense 'Yes, I did' (present tense issue). 2) 'when I was in turbid' appears to be a wrong word; likely 'third grade' or 'a certain age' is intended — replace with a clear time expression. 3) 'favorite part of my life' is corrected to 'favorite part of my childhood' for natural English. 4) 'because I like to ride bike' mixes present with past and lacks article and possessive — change to past 'because I liked to ride my bike.' Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for past events, use correct vocabulary for time references, and include possessive 'my' before 'bike'.

× Yes biker problem in my country because it's have lower cost like using other vehicle as like car motorcycle CNC rich car is kindly costable so if anyone use bike it have no charge no tax no bad it's almost free so it is a.

✓ Yes, biking is a common practice in my country because it has lower costs than using other vehicles such as cars or motorcycles. Bikes are cheap to buy and use; if someone uses a bike they pay no fuel costs or taxes, so it is almost free.

Multiple issues: 1) Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear (sentence structure errors). 2) 'biker problem' likely intended 'biking is common' or 'bicycles are popular' — clarify to 'biking is a common practice' or 'bicycles are popular'. 3) 'it's have' is incorrect verb form and subject-verb agreement; change to 'it has' or 'they have' depending on subject (present tense issue/subject-verb agreement). 4) Run-on fragments and missing articles were corrected: 'other vehicle as like car motorcycle' → 'other vehicles such as cars or motorcycles'. 5) Phrases like 'CNC rich car is kindly costable' are meaningless; replaced with 'such as cars or motorcycles' and 'Bikes are cheap to buy and use'. 6) Replaced 'it have no charge no tax no bad' with 'they pay no fuel costs or taxes' for clarity. Suggestion: break long run-on sentences into clear sentences, ensure subject-verb agreement, use comparative structures ('lower costs than'), and choose precise vocabulary.