Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, tense agreement and fluency. Use correct subject-verb agreement and a concise structure: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and keep it within 1–3 sentences. For example, say when you had the bike and mention a brief memory or how often you rode it, using linking words if you add details.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day to visit my friends and practice tricks in the park, so I became quite confident on two wheels.

제안: Clarify the idea and correct word order and grammar. Begin with a direct opinion, then give specific supporting reasons or examples using linking words like 'because' or 'for example.' Avoid vague phrases and finish the sentence. Keep responses concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and practical. For example, many people cycle to work or school in the morning to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes, when I were a child I used to have a bike.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I used to have a bike.

The subject 'I' requires the singular past form 'was', not 'were'. This is a subject-verb agreement error. Suggestion: use 'was' with singular subjects in past tense (I/he/she/it was). Use 'were' only with plural subjects or in subjunctive contexts (e.g., 'If I were...').

× A few a couple of years yes, actually bikes are very common in our country.

✓ A couple of years ago, yes. Actually, bikes are very common in our country.

The original sentence has extraneous words and incorrect word order ('A few a couple of years yes'). This is a sentence structure and word order problem. Suggestion: simplify to 'A couple of years ago' to indicate time, place the interjection 'yes' appropriately, and separate ideas into clearer sentences: 'A couple of years ago, yes. Actually, bikes are very common in our country.'

× Most people try to use when they go

✓ Most people try to use them when they go somewhere.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear object and destination, causing a sentence structure error. 'Use' needs an object ('them' referring to bikes) and a complement ('when they go somewhere' or 'when they go to work'). Suggestion: include the pronoun 'them' and specify where they go (e.g., 'when they go to work' or 'when they go out') to complete the thought.