Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, avoid confusing words (e.g. “sad” seems wrong here), use correct verb forms and concise supporting details, and add a linking word to connect ideas. Also correct small grammar errors (e.g. "have" → "had", "raising my friends" is unclear). Keep the answer to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child; it was my favorite. I rode it every day around the neighborhood, and I practiced small tricks with my friends, so I have many happy memories.

제안: Make the response more precise and grammatically correct: begin with a clear topic sentence, correct subject-verb agreement ("people use"), and add one or two specific supporting details (e.g. reasons and a brief example). Use a linking word to show cause and effect.

예시: Yes, bicycles and motorbikes are very popular in India because they are convenient and inexpensive. For example, many commuters use two-wheelers to avoid traffic and save on fuel, especially in crowded cities.

× Yes, I had a bicycle when I was sad and it was my favorite.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child and it was my favorite.

The original sentence uses 'when I was sad' which is contextually incorrect; the question asks about being a child. This is not a tense problem but a wrong lexical choice. Replace 'sad' with 'a child' to match the question context and maintain past tense consistency.

× I used to ride every day around the neighborhood and I have many happy memories of raising my friends and practicing little tricks.

✓ I used to ride every day around the neighborhood and I have many happy memories of riding with my friends and practicing little tricks.

The phrase 'raising my friends' is incorrect: 'raising' means to bring up or care for, which does not fit here. The intended meaning is likely 'riding with my friends.' Use the verb 'ride' (base form or gerund 'riding') to express this activity. The tense combination is acceptable: 'used to ride' (past habit) and 'have many happy memories' (present perfect) describing memories.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in India because it's the most convenient and cheapest way of transportation.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in India because they are the most convenient and cheapest form of transportation.

The original uses 'it's' (singular) to refer to 'bikes' (plural), causing pronoun disagreement, and uses 'way of transportation' which is less natural than 'form of transportation.' Change 'it's' to 'they are' to match plural subject and replace 'way' with 'form' for natural collocation.

× Most of the people uses bikes for their daily commuting.

✓ Most of the people use bikes for their daily commuting.

The verb 'uses' does not agree with the plural subject 'Most of the people.' Use the base plural verb 'use.' Also, 'commuting' can stand alone without 'daily' or rephrase as 'their daily commute.' The corrected sentence keeps the present simple to state a general fact.