Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Исправьте грамматику и время, говорите прямо и дайте немного деталей. Вместо неправильных временных форм используйте past simple для описания детства. Также можно добавить причину или альтернативу (например, пешком или общественный транспорт), чтобы расширить ответ, но не больше 3–4 предложений. Используйте связку для логики («because», «so», «but»).

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus. However, I often borrowed bikes from friends to ride in the park.

제안: Сделайте ответ более естественным и точным: используйте соответствующие слова и правильные времена, избегайте повторов и неопределённых фраз. Начните с прямого утверждения, затем приведите одно или два конкретных наблюдения или причину, используя связки («because», «for example», «for instance»). Не говорите обобщённо без конкретики. Длина ответа — до 4 предложений.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, I often see children and adults riding bikes in parks and on dedicated cycle paths. In cities, some people also choose bikes to avoid traffic.

× No, I don't have a bike when I be a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'don't have' and incorrect verb form 'be' for a past situation. Use past tense 'didn't have' for negative statements about the past and the past form 'was' for the first person singular. Suggestion: use simple past for habitual or one-time past facts: 'I didn't have' and 'I was'.

× Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because I every day look for a little kid who is who is riding on bikes.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because every day I see little kids riding bikes.

Problems: word order and tense. 'I every day look for' is awkward and incorrect for the intended meaning; use 'every day I see' (present simple for habitual action). 'Look for' means search, which doesn't fit. Repetition 'who is who is' is an error; use 'little kids riding bikes' or 'who are riding bikes'. Also use plural 'kids' to match general statement. Suggestion: place adverbials like 'every day' before the verb or at sentence start and use 'see' for observing habitual actions: 'Every day I see little kids riding bikes.'