Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap daha doğal ve doğru zaman kullanımıyla geliştirilebilir. Ayrıca kısa ve doğrudan bir konu cümlesi ile başlayıp ardından bir veya iki destekleyici cümle eklenmeli. Mevcut cümlenizde zaman uyumsuzluğu (“it's stolen already” yerine geçmiş zaman uygun olur) ve ifade bozukluğu (“I can't learn how to ride cycle” yerine öğrenemedim ya da öğrenmedim) var. Öneri: 1) Geçmiş zaman kullanın: “I had a bike” veya “I used to have a bike.” 2) Hırsızlık olayını anlatırken net zaman belirtin: “It was stolen when I was ten.” 3) Bisiklet sürmeyi öğrenip öğrenemediğinizi net ifade edin ve kısa bir neden/duygu ekleyin. 4) Cümle sayısını 3-4 ile sınırlayın. Örnek yapısını takip edin: konu cümlesi + kısa detay + duygusal/sonuç cümlesi.

예시: I used to have a bike when I was a child, but it was stolen when I was ten. Because of that, I never really learned to ride properly. I regret it now because I would have liked the freedom to cycle to nearby places.

제안: Cevabınız karışık ve anlaşılması zor. Net bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp, gerekçenizi açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde verin. Dil bilgisi hataları var (“pedestrian cross” yerine “pedestrian crossings” veya “bike lanes”; “we can't easily reading cycle reading bikes” anlamsız). Öneri: 1) Kısa ve doğrudan başlayın: “Not very popular” veya “They are quite popular” gibi. 2) Sebebi spesifik ve doğru kelimelerle verin: “There are few bike lanes” veya “roads are unsafe for cyclists.” 3) Bir örnek veya sonucu ekleyin: “so people prefer cars or public transport.” 4) Bağlaçlar kullanın: “because” veya “so” ile cümleleri bağlayın. Maksimum 3-4 cümle.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because there are few pedestrian crossings and almost no dedicated bike lanes. As a result, the roads feel unsafe for cyclists, so most people prefer to use cars or public transport. If the city improved cycling infrastructure, more people might choose bikes.

× Yes, but it's stolen already and I can't learn how to ride cycle.

✓ Yes, but it was stolen already and I couldn't learn how to ride a bicycle.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present perfect/passive with past context and uses incorrect modal/present tense for ability in the past. Use simple past passive 'was stolen' to match the past timeframe. Use 'couldn't' (past ability) instead of 'can't' because the context is about childhood. Also use the count noun 'a bicycle' rather than 'cycle.' Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for events that occurred in the past.

× No because we don't have a pedestrian cross so we can't easily reading cycle reading bikes, sorry.

✓ No, because we don't have pedestrian crossings, so we can't easily ride bicycles.

Several errors: 'pedestrian cross' is incorrect; the correct term is 'pedestrian crossing' (countable plural if general). 'Reading cycle reading bikes' is unintelligible and mixes forms; the intended verb is 'ride' (not 'reading'). Use plural 'bicycles' or 'bikes' for general statement. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use the noun 'pedestrian crossings' and the verb 'ride' with the object 'bicycles'.