Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the verb tenses and some word choices, make the response more concise and natural, and add a linking phrase. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (age, who gave it, where you rode it). Avoid redundant words and small grammar errors (use past tense consistently: 'had', 'was', 'rode', 'around').

예시: Yes, I had a small pink bicycle when I was a child. My parents gave it to me for my eighth birthday, and I often rode it around our neighborhood with my friends after school.

제안: Make the idea clearer and use correct grammar and linking words. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then explain reasons with specific examples. Use phrases like 'mainly because' or 'for example' and avoid literal words like 'walk' if you mean 'commute'. Use correct verbs and articles: 'it's easy to use', 'to get to work or school'.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, mainly because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many students and office workers cycle short distances to get to school or work, and cycling is often faster than driving in congested cities.

× I have a small pink bicycle when I was a child.

✓ I had a small pink bicycle when I was a child.

The student used the present perfect form 'have' with a past time phrase 'when I was a child'. For a completed past situation, use the simple past 'had'. Suggestion: use simple past for events tied to a specific past time (e.g., 'I had...').

× I used to ride it very round our neighborhood with my friends.

✓ I used to ride it all around our neighborhood with my friends.

The phrase 'very round' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'all around' to indicate throughout an area. Suggestion: use 'all around' or 'around' with 'neighborhood' (e.g., 'ride it around the neighborhood'). Also include the definite article 'our' is acceptable; keep 'our neighborhood'.

× because it's easy use Go to job and go to school and walk.

✓ because it's easy to use it to go to work, to go to school, or to walk.

The original sentence has several issues: missing 'to' before the infinitive, incorrect capitalization 'Go', wrong noun 'job' instead of 'work', and missing object for 'use'. This is primarily a pronoun and infinitive construction problem. Suggestion: add 'to' before infinitives, include an object for 'use' ('use it'), and use 'work' for 'job' in this context. Also separate activities with commas or 'or' for clarity.