Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Отвечайте напрямую в прошедшем времени и избегайте тавтологии. Начните с четкого тематического предложения (например, "Yes, I did"), затем добавьте 1–2 поддерживающих предложения с конкретными деталями (когда вы её получили, где катались, что вам больше всего нравилось). Используйте связки для плавности и не более 3–4 предложений всего.

예시: Yes, I did. I got a small red bike when I was seven and spent most afternoons cycling around my neighbourhood. I liked riding to the park with my friends because it felt free and gave me a chance to explore.

제안: Говорите уверенно и стройте ответ связно: начните с краткого утверждения, затем объясните своё мнение с конкретными примерами. Избегайте повторов и слов-паразитов, используйте правильную грамматику (например, "many people ride bikes", "grandparents often ride bikes") и связки ("because", "for example"). Ограничьте ответ 2–4 предложениями.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and exercise. For example, you can often see teenagers cycling to school and elderly people riding bikes in parks for leisure.

× Yes, I have a bike and I love to ride on my bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike and I loved to ride my bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so verbs should be in the past tense. Change 'have' to 'had' and 'love' to 'loved' to match the past-time reference. Also, remove the preposition 'on' before 'my bike' because in English we usually say 'ride a bike' or 'ride my bike.' Use past tense consistently to improve grammatical correctness.

× I think yeah, bikes, yeah, yeah, bikes popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country.

This sentence is disfluent and missing the auxiliary verb 'are' required for present simple passive or descriptive statements. Remove filler words ('yeah') and add the verb 'are' to form a grammatical present-tense statement: 'bikes are popular.' Keep it concise and use subject-verb structure 'bikes are popular.'

× Man's and like grandmas and like grandfathers usually rides on bike.

✓ Men, grandmas, and grandfathers usually ride bikes.

There are several issues: 'Man's' is incorrect form; use plural 'men.' The verb 'rides' is third-person singular but the subject is plural, so use 'ride' (subject-verb agreement). Also, use 'bikes' or 'a bike' instead of 'on bike.' Remove filler 'like' for clarity and parallel structure. The corrected sentence uses plural nouns with the plural verb 'ride.'