Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Phần trả lời của bạn có lỗi phát âm và sai từ (buy thay vì bike). Bạn cần: 1) Nghe và phát âm chính xác từ vựng cơ bản (ví dụ: 'bike' /baɪk/). 2) Trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi thay vì lặp lại câu của người gọi (bắt đầu bằng câu khẳng định như 'Yes, I did' hoặc 'No, I didn't'). 3) Dùng 1–2 câu bổ sung ngắn gọn để mô tả (ví dụ: ai cho bạn, bạn dùng nó để làm gì).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng đúng nhưng nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, lựa chọn từ và cấu trúc. Bạn cần: 1) Sử dụng từ chính xác ('bikes' không 'bars', 'children' chứ không 'a children'). 2) Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (e.g. 'Yes, bikes are very popular here.'). 3) Dùng liên từ để kết nối ý (e.g. 'because', 'for example') và sửa thì/định dạng số (children plural). 4) Giữ không quá 3–4 câu, cụ thể hoá bằng ví dụ hoặc tần suất.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many students ride them to school and adults use them for short trips. For example, I often see children cycling to class in the morning, and some people prefer cycling for exercise in the evenings.

× Did you have a buy when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student wrote 'buy' which is a verb, not the noun 'bike'. This is a lexical error rather than grammar, but it affects meaning. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'bike' when asking about ownership of a bicycle.

× Yeah, I think bars are really popular in my country because everyone here who sees a children or are in a in school, they always ride by to school or the adult who ride by for a walk.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are really popular in my country because everyone here who sees a child or is in school always rides by to school, and adults ride by for a walk.

Multiple errors corrected following the allowed types: 'bars' should be plural 'bikes' (wrong word choice similar to singular/plural confusion). 'a children' mixes singular/plural; change to 'a child' (singular). 'are in a in school' is incorrect; use 'is in school' for a singular subject. Subject-verb agreement: 'everyone' is singular so use 'is' and 'always rides' not 'ride'. 'the adult who ride by for a walk' should be 'adults ride by for a walk' to match plural meaning or 'the adult who rides by for a walk' for singular. Suggestion: pay attention to singular/plural forms and subject-verb agreement; identify the intended noun (bike) and keep number consistent with determiners and verbs.