Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến thông tin khó hiểu. Cần: 1) Trả lời trực tiếp bằng câu chủ đề (Yes/No + brief reason). 2) Sử dụng ngữ pháp đơn giản chính xác (past tense cho hành động trong quá khứ). 3) Cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: ai cho bạn, loại xe, cảm giác của bạn). 4) Giữ câu ngắn, tối đa 3–4 câu, dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để nối ý nếu cần.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one. Most of my friends had simple bikes, and I often walked to school instead. I remember feeling a little jealous but also proud when I managed to borrow a bike occasionally.

제안: Ý chính có nhưng diễn đạt lộn xộn và nhiều lỗi từ vựng/ngữ pháp. Cần: 1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes, they are popular / No, they aren't). 2) Giải thích lý do cụ thể (tiện lợi, rẻ, giao thông). 3) Dùng các cấu trúc liên kết (for example, because, so) để nối ý. 4) Tránh lỗi từ; dùng từ phù hợp như "commute", "students", "workers".

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short journeys. For example, many office workers and students use bikes to commute to work or school, especially in crowded cities. As a result, you can often see bike lanes and many people parking bikes near stations.

× With I watch you I want to have good bias such as my friends.

✓ When I was young I wanted to have a good bike like my friends.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns and word choices. 'With I watch you' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'When I was young/child'. 'Want' should be past tense 'wanted' to match 'when I was'. 'Bias' is incorrect word; should be 'bike'. Use of 'such as my friends' is awkward; 'like my friends' is natural. Suggestion: use 'When I was young I wanted to have a good bike like my friends.'

× I do not several pies because my parent do not have a condition to buy pie

✓ I did not have a bike because my parents could not afford to buy one.

Multiple errors: tense should be past 'did not have' to match childhood context. 'Several pies' and 'pie' are wrong words — likely 'bike' intended. 'Parent' should be plural 'parents'. 'Do not have a condition to buy' is incorrect English; use 'could not afford to buy'. Also use the pronoun 'one' to refer to 'a bike'. Suggestion: use 'I did not have a bike because my parents could not afford to buy one.'

× In my country's prize the popular place everyone because it's the convenient entry for example officer work and students uppie to work or school.

✓ In my country bicycles are popular everywhere because they are a convenient way for people, for example office workers and students, to get to work or school.

Sentence has many issues: 'In my country's prize' is meaningless; likely 'In my country' is correct start. Need plural subject 'bicycles are popular' (subject-verb agreement and plural). 'The popular place everyone' is incorrect; use 'popular everywhere'. 'It's the convenient entry' should be 'they are a convenient way'. 'Officer work' incorrect; use 'office workers'. 'Uppie' is nonword; intended 'to go' or 'to get' to work or school. Also ensure pronoun agreement 'they are' for plural. Suggestion: 'In my country bicycles are popular everywhere because they are a convenient way for people, for example office workers and students, to get to work or school.'