Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Focus on understanding the examiner's question and answer directly. Use the correct grammatical form (e.g., 'I had a bike' or 'Did I have a bike?') and respond with a clear, short statement. Keep answers natural and concise (up to 5 sentences). If needed, add one supporting detail using a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, so I learned to ride it when I was five.

제안: Improve accuracy, fluency and coherence. Correct grammar (e.g., 'people tend to prefer bikes to trains' or 'people prefer to ride bikes rather than take trains') and avoid filler or repeated words. Use a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details with linking words ('because', 'however', 'for example'). Pronounce or write words correctly and complete the thought—finish the comparison or reason.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular, but it depends on the area. For example, in quieter residential parts of Tokyo many people prefer bikes because they are cheaper and make short trips more convenient, whereas in the city center people often use trains for longer commutes.

× Did you have a bike when I were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when I was a child?

The verb 'were' does not agree with the subject 'I' in past simple affirmative clause. Use 'was' with the singular subject 'I' in past tense. Suggestion: use 'I was' for past statements about yourself.

× I live in Tokyo where people are tended to takef perlered to take a bike rather than take trains because it's more easy to access to the destinations than

✓ I live in Tokyo where people tend to prefer taking a bike rather than taking trains because it is easier to access destinations by bike.

Multiple errors: 'are tended to' is incorrect; correct is 'tend to' (verb phrase for habitual actions). 'perlered' is a typo for 'prefer'. After verbs like 'prefer', use the -ing form when followed by a gerund phrase ('prefer taking'). 'takef' and 'perlered' are misspellings. 'more easy' is incorrect comparative form; use 'easier'. 'access to the destinations' is wrong preposition/structure—use 'access destinations' or 'get to destinations'. Also compare means 'easier to access destinations by bike' is clearer. Suggestions: use 'tend to prefer taking' or simply 'tend to take' and use 'easier' not 'more easy', and 'access destinations' or 'get to destinations by bike'.