Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is grammatically correct and direct, but very short and lacks development. To improve, give a clear topic sentence and add 1–2 supporting details (where you rode it, how often, or why it mattered). Use a linking word to connect ideas and keep it within 3–4 sentences. For example, briefly state that you had a bike, mention when or where you rode it, and add a simple reason or memory.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood every day. Because there were few buses nearby, cycling was my main way to get around and it helped me feel independent.

제안: Your answer attempts to provide figures and a reason, but the sentence structure, vocabulary and coherence need improvement. Start with a clear opinion, then give specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., because, for example, therefore). Avoid vague numbers unless you are confident. Use correct word order and appropriate nouns (e.g., ‘bike manufacturers’). Keep to 2–3 well-formed sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, there are millions of bicycles and several well-known bike manufacturers based here, so production and availability are high.

× I think two million or three million bikes we have in my country and we have a good bikes because my country is maker bikes. We have a company, you know.

✓ I think we have two or three million bikes in my country, and we have good bikes because my country makes bicycles. We have a company, you know.

Multiple errors apply but per instructions only address listed types. Singular/plural: 'a good bikes' mixes singular article with plural noun; correct to 'good bikes' or 'a good bike'. 'maker bikes' is incorrect word order and form; use verb 'makes' with plural subject 'my country' and noun 'bicycles' (plural). Also reorder phrase 'two million or three million bikes we have' to natural word order 'we have two or three million bikes'. Suggestions: place the article correctly (remove 'a' before plural), use correct noun forms ('bikes' or 'bicycles'), and use natural subject-verb word order ('we have two or three million bikes').