Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is short and correct but too brief. To improve, give a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details (where you rode it, who you rode with, or a memorable moment). Keep it natural and under five sentences, using linking words if you add details.

예시: Yes, I did. I often rode a small red bike around my neighborhood with my friends, especially after school. Because the streets were quiet, I felt safe practicing new tricks and building confidence.

제안: Your answer conveys an opinion but has vocabulary errors and awkward phrasing. Replace incorrect words ("spikes") with "bikes", simplify grammar, and add specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore, for instance) and keep to a maximum of five sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people enjoy cycling to stay fit. For example, urban areas have many bike lanes and weekend group rides, so cycling has become both a practical and social activity.

× Yes, I do think spikes are popular in my country because growing on such a country where people are really excited for training their bodies, they go cycling a lot.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country because, in a country where people are very enthusiastic about training their bodies, they go cycling a lot.

The original sentence misused the adjective 'spikes' instead of 'bikes' (wrong word choice) and had awkward adjective/adverb use ('growing on such a country') and an incorrect adverb 'really excited for training' that should be 'very enthusiastic about training'. Also word order and article use were incorrect. Suggestion: replace 'spikes' with 'bikes', use the phrase 'in a country where', use 'very enthusiastic about' rather than 'really excited for', and add a comma after the introductory clause to improve clarity.