Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more fluent and avoid hesitation words (e.g., “uh”). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details. Correct minor grammar errors (e.g., “when I was a child,” “now I hardly ride it”). Keep answers within 3–4 sentences and use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I had a city bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my friends to the park and to school when I was in junior high. However, I hardly ride it now because I usually travel by train.

제안: Provide a clear direct response, then support with specific examples and linking words. Avoid repetition and fill gaps with precise vocabulary (e.g., “commuter bikes,” “rural areas,” “sports bikes”). Correct grammar and complete the sentence. Keep it organized: topic sentence + 1–2 supporting details.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular. In cities many people use commuter bikes to reach the nearest train station, while in rural areas people prefer sports or mountain bikes for longer rides.

× I had a, uh, city bike and I used to go anywhere with my friends when I was child.

✓ I had a city bike and I used to go anywhere with my friends when I was a child.

Missing article 'a' before 'child'. English requires an article or determiner with singular countable nouns in this context. Also remove extra comma and filler for fluency. Suggestion: include 'a' -> 'a child' and simplify the sentence by removing unnecessary pauses.

× When I was a junior high school student, Yeah, but now I hardly write it.

✓ When I was a junior high school student, I used to ride a bike, but now I hardly ever ride one.

Mismatch of verb meaning and incorrect verb 'write' used instead of 'ride'. Present tense phrase 'now I hardly write it' is incorrect. 'Hardly ever ride' conveys the intended low frequency in present tense. Also replace 'it' with 'one' for clarity and 'used to ride' to reflect past habitual action.

× Yeah, I definitely think so in the in the city area many people ride bikes to to get to nearest station and also the rural area a sports bike readily

✓ Yeah, I definitely think so. In the city area, many people ride bikes to get to the nearest station, and in rural areas, sport bikes are also common.

Multiple issues: unnecessary repetition 'in the in the' and 'to to'; missing article 'the' before 'nearest station'; 'the rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match general statement; awkward phrase 'a sports bike readily' is ungrammatical. Rephrase to 'sport bikes are also common' and add necessary commas. Suggestions: remove repetitions, add 'the', use plural 'areas', and restructure final clause.