Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Corrige errores básicos y mejora la fluidez: en este caso hay un error léxico («buy» en lugar de «bike») y la oración puede ser más natural y estructurada. Evita muletillas como «probably» sin necesidad, y añade un detalle específico para enriquecer la respuesta. Por ejemplo, menciona el tipo de bicicleta o una breve anécdota. Usa una oración temática seguida de un detalle con una palabra de enlace si das más información.

예시: Yes, I had a bike from about the age of five. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it in the park near my house every weekend.

제안: Mejora la gramática y la precisión: hay errores como omitir el sujeto o verbo correcto («because is» debe ser «because they are»), y expresiones vacilantes («umm») que reducen la naturalidad. Sé más específico sobre por qué son populares (economía, tráfico, cultura) y utiliza conectores para claridad. Mantén las respuestas dentro de 3–4 oraciones como máximo.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For many people, cycling is faster than driving in heavy traffic, and it also helps save money on fuel and public transport.

× Yes, of course I had a buy since I was probably five years old.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike since I was probably five years old.

The student used 'buy' instead of 'bike', which is a word-choice error, not listed explicitly, but it most closely aligns with incorrect use of words. Suggestion: replace the incorrect word with the intended noun 'bike'. Also consider using 'have had' if you want to emphasize duration from childhood to now: 'I have had a bike since I was probably five.' This second option requires present perfect tense when linking past start to present.

× Yes, of course, bikes are very popular in my country because is the cheapest umm way to transport each other.

✓ Yes, of course, bikes are very popular in my country because they are the cheapest way to get around.

The original sentence omits the subject for the clause 'is the cheapest', producing an ungrammatical clause. Also 'transport each other' is incorrect collocation; native phrasing is 'get around' or 'travel' or 'transport people'. Suggestion: include the correct subject 'they' and use 'are' to match plural 'bikes', and use 'get around' for idiomatic expression: 'they are the cheapest way to get around.'