Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence (e.g., "No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child."). Then briefly add one supporting detail using a linking word to explain why or give context (e.g., "because my family lived in the city and we used public transport"). Keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually got around by bus because my family lived in a busy city. As a result, I didn’t learn to ride until I was a teenager.

제안: Answer directly, then add clear, specific reasons using linking words. Use correct articles and plural forms, and avoid repetitive phrasing. For example, start with a topic sentence: "Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country." Then add two specific supporting points linked with words like "however" or "because" (safety concerns, where people ride). Keep sentences natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. However, most people ride them in cycling clubs or on designated paths rather than on streets because road safety is a concern. In particular, many parents discourage girls from cycling on busy roads due to traffic and safety risks.

× No, I haven't got any bikes when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have any bikes when I was a child.

The speaker refers to a completed past time frame ('when I was a child'), so the past simple tense is required. 'Haven't got' is present perfect and is used for actions with relevance to the present or unspecified time. Use 'didn't have' to correctly place the lack of bikes in the past. Suggestion: use past simple with clear past time expressions (e.g., 'when I was a child, I didn't have...').

× Yes, they are popular, but we usually ride them in clubs, not in compound, not in the streets.

✓ Yes, they are popular, but we usually ride them in clubs, not in compounds or on the streets.

'Compound' should be plural ('compounds') when speaking generally about types of places. Also, the preposition for 'streets' is 'on' rather than 'in' for movement along roads. Use 'or' to connect alternatives. Suggestion: match noun number for general statements and use correct prepositions (e.g., 'on the street(s)').

× It's not that safe, especially for girls, to ride a bike in a street.

✓ It's not that safe, especially for girls, to ride a bike on the street.

When speaking generally about streets, use 'on the street' rather than 'in a street'. The indefinite article 'a' makes this a specific singular reference; for a general statement it's better to use 'the street' or 'the streets'. Suggestion: use 'on the street' for activities occurring along roads and prefer 'the street' or 'the streets' when making general safety statements.