Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it has minor issues: the first sentence is direct but the linking word “However” is unnecessary and slightly awkward between two compatible ideas. Also, you could give one specific detail to make the answer more vivid (for example, how often you rented or a memory). Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and use a smoother linking word or none when ideas are not contrasting.

예시: I didn’t have my own bike as a child. My dad often took me to the riverside to rent one on weekends, and I remember learning to balance on a small blue bike while he ran alongside me.

제안: Your response addresses the question but starts with an inappropriate linking word (“However”) which suggests contrast without prior contrasting idea. Grammar needs minor correction (“riding bike” → “riding bikes” or “cycling”). You should add a brief reason or example to support your opinion (e.g., infrastructure, culture, or weather) to make the answer more specific and convincing.

예시: I don’t think cycling is very common in my country because there aren’t many bike lanes and public transport is more convenient. Instead, many people prefer electric scooters for short trips around town.

× Well, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Well, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

No article error; sentence is correct. No change needed.

× However, sometimes my dad would take me to the Riverside to rent a bike.

✓ However, sometimes my dad would take me to the riverside to rent a bike.

Use of capitalization: 'Riverside' as a common noun should be lowercase unless it is a proper name. Change improves correctness and consistency. The sentence structure and tense are appropriate (past habitual using 'would').

× However, I don't really think that riding bike is a very common thing in my country.

✓ However, I don't really think that riding a bike is a very common thing in my country.

Add the indefinite article 'a' before 'bike' because 'bike' is a countable singular noun. Also consider a more natural phrasing: 'riding a bike is not very common in my country.'

× I suppose riding scooter is more popular.

✓ I suppose riding scooters is more popular.

When speaking generally about people riding this kind of vehicle, use the plural 'scooters' or include an article with singular: 'riding a scooter is more popular.' The plural sounds natural to indicate the general activity; alternatively use 'riding a scooter'.