Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering it. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no + brief info), then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep it natural, concise and within five sentences. For example, state whether you had a bike, mention when you got it or who gave it to you, and describe one memory or how often you rode it.

예시: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. In fact, my parents bought it for me on my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school almost every day. Because I practiced a lot, I became quite confident riding on busy streets.

제안: Your reply incorrectly repeats or changes key words from the examiner's question instead of giving an opinion. To improve, start with a clear direct answer (Yes/No/It depends), then give specific reasons and an example using linking words like 'because' or 'for example.' Keep vocabulary simple and relevant and limit to up to five sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and rental schemes, so more commuters choose cycling instead of driving.

× Did you have it back when you were a child

✓ Did you have a bike back when you were a child?

The student used the pronoun 'it' without a clear antecedent; the examiner's question mentioned 'a bike', so the response should repeat the noun for clarity. Use of 'it' here is ambiguous and unnatural in this context. Also add a question mark to mark the sentence as a question. Suggestion: Repeat the noun ('a bike') instead of using 'it' when referring back to something introduced in the previous question.

× Do you think bags are popular in your country

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The examiner asked about 'bikes', but the student replied with 'bags', which is a content error and also creates a mismatch. This is not strictly a grammatical error but a sentence/content mismatch; classify as sentence structure error since the response does not address the same subject. Also add a question mark. Suggestion: Use the same noun as in the question ('bikes') to answer appropriately and keep the sentence a proper question.