Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: The answer is too short and not relevant. Give a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add 1–2 supporting details (brief description, memory, or reason). Keep it natural and under five sentences, and use linking words if you add details.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for my seventh birthday. I used it every weekend to ride around the neighborhood, which helped me feel independent and confident.

제안: Good content and clear reasons, but there are some grammar and cohesion issues. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "for example", "also"). Avoid awkward phrasing like "before riding bikes." Use more precise vocabulary (commute, affordable) and ensure sentences are grammatically complete.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short trips or to commute to work because they help avoid traffic and are much more affordable than cars. Also, students often ride bikes to school since they are easy to park and maintain.

× So.

✓ Yes.

The student reply 'So.' is not a grammatically appropriate response to the question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' This is a sentence structure / discourse error because 'So.' does not answer the question. Use 'Yes.' or 'No, I didn't.' to directly respond. Suggestion: give a short affirmative or negative answer relevant to the question, e.g., 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.' to be clear.

× They're very convenient for avoiding traffic and are also cheaper than cars, so a lot of students and workers before riding bikes.

✓ They're very convenient for avoiding traffic and are also cheaper than cars, so a lot of students and workers used to ride bikes.

The original phrase 'a lot of students and workers before riding bikes' is ungrammatical: it mixes present-tense statements with an incorrect placement of 'before' and lacks a proper past or habitual verb. The intended meaning is habitual or past-tense action, so 'used to ride' is appropriate. Alternatively, for present habit say 'so a lot of students and workers ride bikes.' Suggestion: choose the correct tense for time reference (present: 'ride bikes'; past habitual: 'used to ride bikes') and place the verb immediately after the subject to form a correct clause.