Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise, correct minor grammar errors, and add a linking word or brief detail to make the response coherent. Use a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details (when, where, with whom).

예시: Yes — I did. My parents bought me a small bicycle when I was seven, and I used to ride it every weekend in the park with my friends. It was great exercise and a fun way to spend time together.

제안: Make the response more natural and specific: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two concrete reasons and an example. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and avoid vague phrasing like "it is very easy to go around."

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many students ride to school, and commuters often use bikes for short trips because they avoid traffic and cost nothing to fuel.

× I had a small ride bicycle that my parents bought me when I was 7 and I used to ride it every weekend around the park with my friends.

✓ I had a small, red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used to ride it every weekend around the park with my friends.

Problems: incorrect word choice 'ride' before 'bicycle' (not listed exactly) and missing comma and numeral style. According to the provided list, this most closely fits 'Sentence structure errors' and 'Article errors'. The phrase 'small ride bicycle' is ungrammatical; use a correct adjective-noun collocation such as 'small red bicycle' or 'small bicycle'. Also spell out single-digit numbers in formal speech/text: 'seven'. Add a comma before 'and' to join two independent clauses. Suggestion: choose a proper adjective to describe the bicycle and ensure adjectives precede the noun in correct order; write numbers under ten in words and punctuate compound sentences with a comma before coordinating conjunctions joining independent clauses.

× In my opinion, bikes are very popular in my country because it is very easy to go around like the students can go to the school by bicycle.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are very popular in my country because it is very easy to get around; for example, students can go to school by bicycle.

Problems: incorrect preposition and awkward clause 'go around like the students can go to the school by bicycle.' Use 'get around' rather than 'go around' for general mobility. Remove the article 'the' before 'school' in this general statement: say 'go to school'. Replace 'like' (which introduces an informal comparison) with 'for example' or restructure the sentence. Suggestion: use the idiomatic verb 'get around', omit unnecessary articles with general nouns (go to school), and use clear connectors such as 'for example' when giving examples.