Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Sé más conciso y organiza tu respuesta: comienza con una oración temática directa, luego añade uno o dos detalles específicos y evita repetir la misma idea. Además, utiliza conectores cortos si das detalles adicionales.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven, with training wheels at first. I remember riding it to a nearby park every afternoon, which helped me become confident on two wheels.

제안: Clarifica y organiza las ideas: empieza con una oración clara que responda la pregunta, luego explica por qué con ejemplos específicos y usa conectores (for example, because, so) para que la respuesta sea coherente. Evita frases incompletas y repeticiones.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many people ride them to work or school because they are cheap and convenient, especially in residential neighborhoods with narrow streets.

× Yes, I did I cannot remember what kind of bike I had, but I only remember that it was a red one, a red one and that's it.

✓ Yes, I did. I cannot remember what kind of bike I had; I only remember that it was a red one and that's it.

Type ID: 26. The original sentence runs several clauses together without proper punctuation or connectors, creating a run-on sentence. Separate independent clauses with a period, semicolon, or coordinating conjunction, and avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily. Suggestion: use a period after 'Yes, I did', replace the comma splice with a semicolon or period, and remove duplicated 'a red one' to make the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I'm sure they are very popular in my country and in several neighborhoods the people used to ride their bikes they ride their bikes for work or to work and

✓ Yes, I'm sure they are very popular in my country. In several neighborhoods, people ride their bikes to work.

Type ID: 6. The original mixes past habitual 'used to ride' with present tense 'ride' and ends with an incomplete clause 'and', causing tense inconsistency and an incomplete sentence. To match the present-tense context of the question about current popularity, use the simple present 'ride'. Also remove redundant phrasing ('they ride their bikes' repeated) and finish the sentence. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and complete the thought, using commas to set off introductory phrases.