Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Fix verb forms and remove redundancy. For example, say whether you had a bike, explain why or why not, mention borrowing a cousin's bike and how much you learned. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have my own bike as a child because my parents couldn’t afford one. However, I sometimes borrowed my older cousin’s bike, so I learned a little about balancing and steering. Although I practiced a few times, I never became confident enough to ride regularly.

제안: Provide a clear main idea and specific supporting details; use correct vocabulary to distinguish bikes from other vehicles. Use linking words (for example, however, because) and avoid contradictions. Explain why bikes are popular (cost, convenience) and give an example or comparison. Keep responses concise and grammatical.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. However, many people also use small three-wheeled vehicles that look like open taxis for short distances. These vehicles can feel unsafe because they lack proper doors and safety features, so some people prefer bicycles for short, quick journeys.

× No, that actually set because I actually want to one but my dad didn't got me So I borrowed my older cousin bike and I learned a little how to use it but I didn't learn learning that much so my dad still

✓ No, actually I didn't have one because I wanted one but my dad didn't get me one. So I borrowed my older cousin's bike and I learned a little how to use it, but I didn't learn that much.

Multiple sentence structure problems: incorrect word choice ('set' instead of 'have'), wrong verb form ('didn't got' should be 'didn't get'), missing articles and possessive ('my older cousin bike' should be 'my older cousin's bike'), redundant phrasing ('learned learning'), and a sentence fragment ('so my dad still' is incomplete). Suggestions: use correct base verb after 'didn't' (didn't + base verb), use possessive for ownership, remove redundant words, and finish thoughts as complete sentences. Grammar problem type ID:26

× No, that actually set because I actually want to one but my dad didn't got me So I borrowed my older cousin bike and I learned a little how to use it but I didn't learn learning that much so my dad still

✓ No, actually I didn't have one because I wanted one but my dad didn't get me one. So I borrowed my older cousin's bike and I learned a little how to use it, but I didn't learn that much.

Inconsistent past tense: 'want' should be 'wanted' to match past time frame, and 'didn't got' is incorrect; after 'didn't' use the base form 'get'. Suggestions: maintain past tense throughout by using past forms (wanted, didn't get, borrowed, learned). Grammar problem type ID:5

× So I borrowed my older cousin bike and I learned a little how to use it but I didn't learn learning that much so my dad still

✓ So I borrowed my older cousin's bike and I learned a little how to use it, but I didn't learn that much.

Missing possessive apostrophe and article: 'my older cousin bike' should be 'my older cousin's bike' to show possession. Also remove redundant 'learning' and unnecessary 'so my dad still' fragment. Suggestion: use possessive forms for relatives' belongings and avoid redundant gerunds. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Yes, it is very popular, especially the small cars that's like taxis, but in our country it's not that taxi. It has open doors and it didn't have doors actually. It's actually scary because you can fail at any time. Although it's actually

✓ Yes, they are very popular, especially the small vehicles that are like taxis. In our country these vehicles often have no doors or have open sides, which can be scary because accidents can happen at any time.

Several structural and agreement problems: 'it is very popular' should match plural 'bikes' to 'they are'; 'small cars that's like taxis' mixes singular/plural and uses wrong relative clause ('that's' -> 'that are'); 'it's not that taxi' is unclear; 'it has open doors and it didn't have doors actually' is contradictory and uses wrong tense; sentence fragment 'Although it's actually' is incomplete. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement (plural subject -> plural verb), use clear relative clauses ('vehicles that are like taxis'), and complete clauses instead of fragments. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Yes, it is very popular, especially the small cars that's like taxis, but in our country it's not that taxi.

✓ Yes, they are very popular, especially the small vehicles that are like taxis, but in our country they are different.

Pronoun and reference errors: 'it' refers to 'bikes' which is plural, so use 'they'. 'that's like taxis' mixes 'that is' with plural noun; use 'that are'. 'it's not that taxi' is ambiguous and uses incorrect pronoun. Suggestion: keep pronouns consistent with the nouns they refer to and use plural forms when appropriate. Grammar problem type ID:11

× It's actually scary because you can fail at any time.

✓ It's actually scary because you can fall at any time.

Wrong verb choice: 'fail' is incorrect in this context; 'fall' is the correct verb for losing balance from a bike or open vehicle. Also no preposition issue here beyond verb choice. Suggestion: choose verbs that accurately describe the action; 'fall' fits physical accidents. Grammar problem type ID:13